On the Horizon – daughters of the storm (Kim Wilkins)

Ahoy there me mateys!  I received this fantasy eARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.  So here be me honest musings . . .

daughters of the storm (Kim Wilkins)

Title: daughters of the storm

Author: Kim Wilkins

Publisher: Random House Publishing Group – Ballantine Del Ray

Publication Date: TOMORROW!!! (hardcover/e-book)

ISBN: 978-0399177477

Source: NetGalley

I wanted to love this book, I really did.  The publisher offered me an e-arc of this book because I adored the bear and the nightingale.  And honestly it should have been an awesome read.

The story involves five daughters of a king.  A king who happens to have fallen into a deep coma-like slumber.  So all of the daughters are drawn to their father’s side to say their goodbyes.  But what if it is not illness but a magical spell that holds the king in slumber?  The sisters must find out quickly before the kingdom’s peace is torn apart.

I did enjoy the sisters for the most part.  They are all named after plants –

  • Bluebell – a warrior who is set to be the next king
  • Rose – a mother whose unhappy marriage was the price for peace
  • Ash – a student of magic who may possess magic she never asked for
  • Ivy – a young girl who just wants admiration from everyone
  • Willow – a zealot of a new religion who wants the world to convert

So I had two problems with this book.  The first is that the plot was just plodding at parts.  It took me forever to get into this book and I didn’t really get engrossed in the story until after the 60% mark.  It could have been trimmed.  There was too much time where nothing interesting happened and the characters were waiting around.

Which leads to the second problem.  While the characters were waiting around, all of them were confused, upset, and could be annoying.  The sisters seemed to never use their intelligence and instead made extremely rash choices that were a) stupid, b) completely emotionally based, and c) the worst possible choice.  I thought it was ridiculous that all of them couldn’t seem to use logic and reasoning.  I could sort-of accept it for Willow due to her particular set of problems but not for the others.  Ultimately I didn’t totally like any of the sisters and found it hard to wish for success for any of them.

The one really fun note for me was the bad guy, Wylm.  He is a step-brother by marriage.  While his bad-guy motivation was rather lame (having the throne for the sake of being important) I did like that the author had him make some choices that took me completely by surprise.  While most of his actions are caused by his cowardice and need to stay alive, he did have others that led to excellent plot lines and he actually used his brain.  He could be crafty even if his underlying reasons were illogical.  I also enjoyed how his portion of the story resolved in the first book.

Ultimately I would consider this an okay read.  I found Bluebell and Ash’s sections to be very engaging at times.  I did enjoy the magical system and would like to see that explored further.  I am not adverse to reading the next book but I think I would wait for reviews from me crew before making the choice to continue the series.

So lastly . . .

Thank you Random House!

Goodreads has this to say about the novel:

FIVE ROYAL SISTERS. ONE CROWN.

They are the daughters of a king. Though they share the same royal blood, they could not be more different. Bluebell is a proud warrior, stronger than any man and with an ironclad heart to match. Rose’s heart is all too passionate: She is the queen of a neighboring kingdom, who is risking everything for a forbidden love. The twins: vain Ivy, who lives for admiration, and zealous Willow, who lives for the gods. And Ash, who is discovering a dangerous talent for magic that might be a gift–or a curse.

But when their father is stricken by a mysterious ailment, they must come together on a desperate journey to save him and prevent their treacherous stepbrother from seizing the throne. Their mission: find the powerful witch who can cure the king. But to succeed on their quest, they must overcome their differences, and hope that the secrets they hide from one another and the world are never brought to light. Because if this royal family breaks, it could destroy the kingdom.

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13 thoughts on “On the Horizon – daughters of the storm (Kim Wilkins)

  1. Wonderful review, Captain. I have to admit that it did sound pretty intriguing when I first heard about it, but the amount of “nothing-happening” going on sort of does seem to take away a lot of the fun. Thanks for the honesty!

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  2. I totally agree – all the conflict in the book was driven by the relationships between the sisters, so those who aren’t into family dramas are out of luck. I enjoyed this one because family dramas are kind of my guilty pleasure (heh!) but I can totally see why this would fall flat for others.

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  3. Ay Captain! This seems to be a story with more miss than mark. It’s difficult to read a book that takes so long to be engaged in the story but for the characters to be a bit wanting makes it worse. Great idea with the clever names. Sorry that the book is lacking. Great review Captain!

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