On the Horizon – the future will be bs-free (Will McIntosh)

Ahoy there me mateys!  I received this young adult sci-fi eARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.  So here be me honest musings . . .

the future will be bs-free (Will McIntosh)

Title: the future will be bs-free

Author: Will McIntosh

Publisher: Random House Children’s / Delacorte Press

Publication Date: TODAY!! (hardcover/e-book)

ISBN: 978-0553534146

Source: NetGalley

I have loved this author’s work ever since I read love minus eighty and have now gobbled up seven of his novels.

Side note: Get me hands on unbreakable and watchdog and all four novellas!

While I liked this one in parts, it was overall just an okay read.  As usual, the concepts are very cool.  The basic premise of this one is there is a group of teens who invent a truth-telling machine.  But someone wants to stop the technology from getting out there.  As for the teens, they don’t really understand the ramifications of “nothing but the truth” until it is too late.

So I have to admit that I like being honest.  I think lying is usually a waste of time and resources and I try not to do it.  But what if, for example, someone asks if their outfit looks okay and ye think it doesn’t.  But they think they look hot.  So of course ye say that they look awesome because what ye think doesn’t matter and ye don’t want to hurt feelings.  Well with the truth-rings that would be impossible.  Me friends wouldn’t care but an acquaintance?   It could get ugly.

Now the author raises a lot of difficult issues but doesn’t address them in any satisfactory way.  Topics touched on – eating disorders, suicides, when someone thinks they be telling the truth but are mistaken, voyeurism, anxiety, cerebral palsy, vigilantism, greed, etc.  Most are used as plot points either as exposed secrets or unintended consequences for the teens to feel bad about.  But feeling bad about them was about as far as it went.  It didn’t really seem to make the characters act any differently.

In fact pretty much all of the characters are extremely selfish and self-centered.  In the beginning most of them just wanted money.  I could sympathize.  But their idealism never really seemed to turn into true realism.  Plus unfortunately, the plot has some extreme plot holes and the ending was too convenient.  So the teens really didn’t need to grow or change much based on those circumstances.

One of the good elements is that there were caring parents and teachers.  The teens do actually ask the parents for help.  That was a nice change for YA.  The bad parts were that almost all the adults that were involved were ex-military with PTSD or other issues.

Also the romance issues in this book were not to me taste.  The main narrator, Sam, has a crush that is so ridiculous it almost seems cringe-worthy.  The teens all seem to pair off with each other.  The dialogue and tension around the teen-lust was angsty and felt more like 5th graders then almost 18 year olds.  But perhaps I am just too much of a curmudgeon in me old age and can’t sympathize with teenage hormones.  I was a very abnormal teen in that respect so me experience was not the mainstream one.

This book was a fast read and I did want to know how it ended.  I loved the concepts and will be pondering the ramifications for some time to come.  This is certainly not me favourite of his but I will continue to read anything he writes.

So lastly . . .

Thank you Random House Children’s / Delacorte Press!

Netgalley’s website has this to say about the novel:

In a Putin-esque near-future America, the gifted and talented high school has just been eliminated, and Sam and his friends have been using their unexpected free time to work on a tiny, undetectable, utterly reliable lie detector. They’re all in it for the money–except Theo, their visionary. For Theo, it’s about creating a better world. A BS-free world, where no one can lie, and the honest will thrive.

Just when they finish the prototype and turn down an offer to sell their brainchild to a huge corporation, Theo is found dead. Greedy companies, corrupt privatized police, and even the president herself will stop at nothing to steal the Truth App. Sam sets his sights on exposing all lies and holding everyone accountable.

But he and his friends quickly realize the costs of a BS-free world: the lives of loved ones, and political and economic stability. They now face a difficult question: Is the world capable of operating without lies, or are lies what hold it together?

To visit the author’s website go to:

Will McIntosh – Author

To buy the novel please visit:

the future will be bs-free – Book

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Previous Log Entries for this Author

burning midnight (Captain’s Log – Young Adult Fantasy)

hitchers (Dead Men Tell No Tales)

faller (On the Horizon – Sci-Fi eArc)

soft apocalypse (Captain’s Log – Sci-Fi)

14 thoughts on “On the Horizon – the future will be bs-free (Will McIntosh)

  1. Solid review, Captain! I appreciate how evenly balanced your review is. It’s obvious this book had both positive and negative traits in your eyes; all your points are well articulated, as well! While the premise is fascinating, it sounds like the execution was just a bit off. Even though the characters were self-centered, did you like any of them?

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    1. Maybe not so weirdly, the only one I liked was a soldier with a really bad attitude towards everyone. I like me snark and sass. But I didn’t really like any of the main characters. The one I did like got killed off pretty quickly. Thanks for thinking this was a solid review. I mean I thought it was an okay read but it is hard to criticize a favourite author. I don’t want to dissuade someone from picking up this book and loving it. The execution was off but I also have the issue of having read his other works. I just think his others works were so much stronger.
      x The Captain

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      1. It’s hard when you know the potential the author has. For example, Artemis is a much weaker novel than Andy Weir’s other, The Martian. I haven’t written a review for that yet as I don’t know how to write it without putting people off Weir’s writing in general. He is early in his writing journey; I don’t want to discourage new readers!

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      2. The Martian was amazingly well written and I agree with ye about Artemis. It wasn’t a bad book but it was weaker especially when compared to his first. I wondered if I had read Artemis first, I would have liked it more. In any case I be excited for whatever he writes next.
        x The Captain


  2. It is a fabulous premise – maybe in the writing of this one, those issues ended up more gnarly than the author initially intended… It certainly sounds as if this is one to ponder over. Thank you for an excellent review:)

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  3. I was thinking of requesting this but for some reason the title bothered me and I just never did. I do need to read more of his books, though. I’ve got a copy of Live Minus Eighty but why haven’t I read it yet??

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    1. It is a tie between that book and soft apocolyspe as to which is me favourite of his. But I have to admit that I have enjoyed all of his books so far. And aye matey, ye be needing to read that wonderful book!
      x The Captain


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